Is it good for children to start using computers from an early age
and spend long hours on them? Discuss the advantages and
disadvantages.
The computer is one of the largest inventions of mankind and its heavily used in almost all the fields like industries, education, medicines. In continuation of the aforesaid notion, some people believe that it would be beneficial for kids to operate computers from an initial stage, whereas some analysts believe that computers have many drawbacks for offspring. However, I am a strong advocate of the former view that computers are very advantageous for kids. In this essay, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of computers.
There are many advantages of computers for children. First and foremost, a computer increases kid intellectual skills. Computers help to browse any information over the internet, kids can easily search for the solution of their doubts over the internet. Moreover, students can store a large number of books in the computer memory and can access the study materials offline. Furthermore, computer games help to increase the analytical skills. This practice would gradually help a lot in developing cognitive skills in toddlers. That's the reason, many schools have included computers as part of their primary education. Last but not the least, window applications like Microsoft powerpoint presentation and excel sheets are largely used in the cooperative world to give client demos and to show data. As the kids would excel in using these technologies from childhood that would help a lot in his professional life.
On the contrary, there are some drawbacks to using computers at an early stage, kids can witness many unwanted videos like porn movies; which can affect its mental level. Additionally, kids can browse through crime news as well and are likely to get influenced by it. For instance, recent studies by crime team of United States of America has stated that 30% of criminals commit a crime by getting inspiration from criminal serious. Even though computers have certain disadvantages for kids, but these can be overcome by the parent’s supervision and guidance.
To recapitulate, the advantages of computers for kids far outweigh its negative consequences. In my opinion, kids should start learning the computer technologies from an initial stage as it would benefit in long run; however, parents should be attentive towards their kid’s activities as well.
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...ds their kid's activities as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, for instance, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1964.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3514986376 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91242035251 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569482288828 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2924537034 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.368421053 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3157894737 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84210526316 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242776674586 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080924407236 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664106355104 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158320136374 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403421542492 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.