Since the advent of computer, which is regarded as the most revolutionary invention ever, the world has transparently changed. What’s the changes?Surprisingly, computers, which are now effectively and flexibly controlled by children, used to be nearly unaffordable. It may result in long hours usage, nevertheless, i take my own stance that the its benefits outweigh the drawbacks.
One one hand, first and foremost, children, the future generations, have a chance to get used to complicated technology at an early age so when they become older, it would be easier for them to apply what they learnt into life, namely is their study and work someday. Secondly saying, that a child takes advantage of the internet is really a great thing! Thereby, Everyone can find keys for any problems on the internet, without exception! Furthurmore, children should also be educated online if they don’t make so much progress at school. Last but not least, it is the games that help children gain an intellectual brain with strategies and sophistication. Improving thinkings is a appreciated benefit a child can achieve through games.
On the other hand, there are also some disadvantages stemming from computers. The above problem is addiction which means using computers all day long for entertainment, they gain nothing but addiction. Another thing is diseases! An overwhelming brain or a hurting eye, weakened bones, are the results for too much computer time. Thirdly, to some extent, children usually prefer studying to playing. That’s why computers is an annoying distractor! It lures children with notifications on Facebook, Instagram, Youtube, and sometimes develops their curiosity for bad things.
To recapitulate, besides the advantages, there are still drawbacks. Though its good features can prevail the bad ones, children should be taught to use computers at an early age WISELY, with detailed instructions from adults.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Surprisingly
...rently changed. What's the changes?Surprisingly, computers, which are now effectively a...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'hours'' or 'hour's'?
Suggestion: hours'; hour's
...rly unaffordable. It may result in long hours usage, nevertheless, i take my own stan...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...sult in long hours usage, nevertheless, i take my own stance that the its benefit...
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Line 1, column 347, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'its'?
Suggestion: the; its
...nevertheless, i take my own stance that the its benefits outweigh the drawbacks. One o...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: One
...e its benefits outweigh the drawbacks. One one hand, first and foremost, children, the...
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Line 2, column 686, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... sophistication. Improving thinkings is a appreciated benefit a child can achieve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, another thing, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44186046512 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15881684524 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674418604651 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2833359759 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274789410257 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766452217668 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583419483293 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1560051517 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500386991128 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.