Fresh water has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem.
What are the causes of the increased demand and what measure could governments and individuals take to respond to this problem?
Water is certainly an irreplaceable resource of energy. With an increase in pollution and continuous consumption of natural sources, the increasing demand for water which initially was an issue in some countries has now turned into a major worldwide problem. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons behind this growing demand and various actions required by governments and individuals.
There are two major causes for the fresh water scarcity issue. Firstly, industrialization is polluting the major channels of water like rivers, at an exponential rate. Statistics have shown that industrial wastes being produced from factories of developing countries are major contributors to water pollution. Furthermore, the second main reason for this global problem is an increase in pollution. With the population of billions of people, there is a tremendous upliftment in the utilization of fresh water. Subsequently, there has been a massive rise in the amount of non-disposable garbage like plastics being thrown in rivers, these activities are infecting water.
The issue of fresh water shortage requires immediate actions. In my opinion, governments of all countries should form a united organization to deal with this problem. Some strict laws could be imposed on all countries. For instance, disposal of factories wastes into fresh water should be banned, and in case of violation, a heavy penalty would be taken from the defaulter. Moreover, each citizen must make their vital contributions in the resolution of this problem. Every individual could reduce the usage of water and shouldn’t throw the waste inside fresh water sources.
To recapitulate, fresh water scarcity is a matter of an utmost concern among all the nations. It is a high time that each individual must take responsibility to preserve this crucial resource; moreover, the government of all countries should collectively take some important measures to overcome this global problem.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50993377483 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06839137933 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562913907285 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7326754383 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8823529412 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277899703891 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086801371578 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486626526963 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176513787892 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038511316261 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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