Crime rates within our society are increasing at a very rapid rate.
Give causes and solutions.
The soaring crime rate is often at the top of the agenda throughout the world as the leading problem in the 21st century. This essay will explore how poverty and lack of effective education systems are the major contributing factors of increasing crime, and how through governmental support and reforms in the educational system, this issue Can be curtailed.
There are multiple factors that are considered responsible for igniting crimes. Firstly, the poor economic condition of families is deemed as a root cause of this issue. As with the increase in inflation, people are striving hard to make both ends meet which induces pressure on them to earn money by any mean. Take an example of Africa, where the majority of the people, who belong to the poor families, get involved in crimes to feed their dependents. Thus, poverty is the fueling force behind burgeoning crime rates.
Secondly, an ineffective education system is considered a breeding ground for augmenting crime rates. As with the present curriculum, youngsters find it hard to differentiate between right and wrong paths. Mentors put stress on students to earn good grades instead of shaping their moral values. For example, the largest jail in Australia has been found to have a higher proportion of school-going youngsters. Hence, the ill-educational system does fuel this issue.
However, there are certain pragmatic measures that can be taken to reduce the conviction rate. The government should shoulder the responsibilities of people with limited resources by giving them financial support as this will results in a reduction in crime rate due to poverty. Furthermore, amendments to the educational system would also be a better alternative. Through these changes, curriculum and methods of assessment would be redesigned which will ultimately produce a better society.
To sum up, even though poverty and ineffective schooling are a widespread cause of an increase in crime rate, but through higher authorities’ support to the poor families and educational reforms, this problem can be curbed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'result'
Suggestion: result
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38414634146 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95242712392 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591463414634 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5674375853 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.882352941 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2941176471 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156699503207 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460710842297 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545911445698 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951687336592 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488900773788 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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