Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and solutions.

Essay topics:

Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and solutions.

There has been a tremendous declination to the oqualityf life in metropolitan cities in recent years. This essay will discuss one of the major causes of this phenomenon as increasing air pollution and will suggest solutions to improve life in cities.

One of the leading cause that affects life in the city is the pollution levels in the air. People use vehicles which emit highly dangerous gases such as petroleum and carbon monoxide. As a result, the air gets contaminated, and the poisonous fumes can harm human's health for a lifetime. For instance, a recent survey in 'News-Times' reports that one of the Indian cities is marked as the worst city to live in because of the rising pollution levels.

A better way to tackle pollution levels is creating general awareness among people to reduce the usage of private vehicles. The government can conduct campaigns to educate people about the importance of keeping air purity and reducing the usage of cars when travelling to nearby places. For example, many cities are promoting shared transport to degrade the deteriorating effect of fumes in the air. Through this approach, the government and people can bring out a healthy future generation.

In conclusion, decreasing quality of life in urban areas is a matter of concern. This essay discussed air pollution as one of the factors affecting lifestyle and explained the solution which can help in mitigating the pollution levels in the air.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...has been a tremendous declination to the oqualityf life in metropolitan cities in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06694560669 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73512183293 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548117154812 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2832691249 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.916666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154472927172 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630060222578 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664787286084 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104923333746 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555086773716 0.056905535591 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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