Some people think it is better for children to grown up in the city, while others think that life in the countryside is more suitable for them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both places?
It is argued by some people that grew up in the urban area is beneficial for children, while proponents oppose the idea, and believe that the countryside is more convenient to have a quality life. this essay will discuss the major merits and drawbacks of each location.
Firstly, the advantage of living in the town is the number of facilities available for children. For example, educational institutions are well equipped with labs, libraries and other amenities which aid students in their learning process and help them to understand the topic efficiently. As a result, they will be able to progress through their prospective career. On the other hand, the countryside offers a better social life to the child as village people maintain a healthy relationship with each other and support whenever required. this way, children learn the communal behaviours, which are necessary to live a social life. Moreover, children absorb qualities such as respect, anxiety and other cognitive skills from their ancestors as most of the people prefer to stay in a joint-family in the countryside.
However, both places have numerous demerits. One of the drawbacks of city life is the high pollution levels, which affect young people, especially, children adversely. Many children fall sick due to malignant fumes from vehicles and the diseases caused by these can persist throughout their life. Similarly, as the countryside is not developed compared to the city, children will lack medical and educational facilities to a greater extent. Besides, the countryside has improper infrastructures which will prevent students from earning a high degree.
To conclude, while there are different opinions on, whether living in the countryside or city os appropriate for a child, there are numerous advantages and disadvantages for both options.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, well, while, for example, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40277777778 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90871104148 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597222222222 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6147390936 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.142857143 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326952976301 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957570796073 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777280196147 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19407511559 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428691196136 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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