In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both sides and express your opinion.
Earning a high salary depends on a plethora of factors. In many countries, it is a controversial issue whether excessive wages earned by a few people is advantageous for the country or not. The opponents argue that the government should regulate the amount that people gains from their profession. In my opinion, I believe that high remuneration would aid people to do a better service to the indispensable growth of the country.
On the one hand, there are many reasons why the state should control the salary that people earn. Firstly, the government should create equilibrium among people who do similar work. In other words, each employment opportunities should have a balanced salary for the employers in it. Secondly, the extra money can be utilised for the infrastructure of society, which bring more employment opportunities in the country. For example, controlling the salary boosts the public fund, which can be used to develop buildings for new employment.
On the other hand, there are some careers which require high payments because of the mental and physical stress involved in the work. Large pays in jobs such as medicine or engineering is a motivational factor to continue to serve the nation with high responsibilities which improve the social status and the economy of the country worldwide. For example, many talented doctors and engineers in India are recognised for their commitments across the globe, and it encourages foreigners to visit the country. Hence extreme wages are prominent to keep the talents to work hard for the betterment of the society.
In conclusion, some people think that paying a large amount to a few employees will produce a positive impact on the country, while others believe that this amount should be balanced. I opine that additional salary will benefit the country in a number of ways as people tend to remain in their work using all their abilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09554140127 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84020730879 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547770700637 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5532806675 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.666666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403108088338 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126969037327 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777658332145 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237709105223 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871578301757 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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