There will be a traditional celebration in your country and you want to invite your friend from an English-speaking country. Write him/her a letter and - invite your friend, - explain what happens at the party, - describe the tradition and why it’s important in your country, - say why it is important for your friend to be there
Dear Jay,
I am writing this letter to invite to celebrate our traditional festival with us this year. While we were studying together last year, you promised to visit me and believe me this is the best time of the year to come to Pakistan.
While Eid is our religious festival and we celebrate it, when Ramadan which is an Islamic month has finished. On the Eid day, we clean our houses, cook delicious meals, and invite our kith and kin. And the most interesting thing is that children receive money as a gift from elders at this festival.
What is more, in our country, people from all walks of life celebrate it with great enthusiasm. As, it is a great opportunity for people to come closer to each other, leave behind their grievances, and forgive each other. This is lots of fun and frolic.
Moreover, attending this event will be of great importance for you because, as I know, it would be helpful for your thesis project which is about globalization. However, in Pakistan you will come to know that we have not forgotten over traditions.
We would be honored to have you at home as our guest. I assure you we will make it a memorable holiday for you.
Hoping to see you soon!
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'celebrating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'invite' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: celebrating
... I am writing this letter to invite to celebrate our traditional festival with us this y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63425925926 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47163261106 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606481481481 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7794553062 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170191601793 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576502931315 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425562586571 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0798082312675 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290060235888 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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