Being a celebrity- such as a famous film star or sports personality-brings problems as
well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
The Entertainment and sports industries are booming by leaps and bounds. It is thought by many that icons of films and the sports world have to face several ups and downs, during their entire lives. This essay will argue that despite their being some potential benefits, in terms of augmenting their monetary status, the drawback of propaganda in media could harm their professional career.
Admittedly, there are some basic benefits of being a celebrity is money earning. This is to say that besides receiving a hefty amount of money as remuneration from their own industry; many famous brands that are used world widely hire these celebrities as their brand ambassador to publicize their products. For example, Gucci a famous firm recently established a contract with Virat Kohli, a well-known cricket player at the cost of 5 million dollars per year, in return for advertisement of their sports products. However, the lives of sports and film stars are always on stake due to being constantly highlighted in the media.
Despite the advantages above, as a celebrity, their personal lives are being intervened by the social and print media, which could have some serious repercussions. In other words, News agencies publish news according to their own perspective, which might not be true or just one side of the story. As a result, celebrities might end up in a plight because their fans tend to hate them. For example, an India film star was falsely accused of sexual harassment of his secretary. Later, it was revealed that it was just propaganda against him but its impact on his career was long-lasting. Therefore, these kinds of news jeopardize their professional career and ellipses any benefit of money it brings.
To conclude, this essay disagrees that famous personalities have to undergo varies controversies related to their personality which endangered their job, far outweigh outweighs the advantage of earning billions dollars per year through various contracts.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, so, therefore, well, for example, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.240625 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79743185797 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60625 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2467232606 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.785714286 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14859873207 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607441566636 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474331475829 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922321264593 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396531041152 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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