In some countries, younger people are neglecting their right to vote.
What problems does this cause and what are some of the possible solutions
The younger population constitutes a major proportion of the democratic world. In many countries, juveniles are ignorant of their basic democratic right such as vote casting. This essay will suggest that the primary problem this cause is approval of policies against the favor of youth, and public awareness campaign as the most viable solution.
The main problem of not taking part in elections process is it takes young people to a plight because political parties and representatives tend to support the people, who vote and support these candidates in their elections. This is to say, they are more likely to raise their voice in favor of their elder supporters, such as better pension plans and health benefits. For example, in Bangladesh, 44% of the young population does not cast vote in recent elections which results in failure of up-dated education system because of the lack of focus of state-runners towards people who do not vote for them.
A solution to this predicament is public awareness campaigns by the election candidates on media, in schools, and on work-places, in which younger generation can get acquaintance with the possible dangers of not using their basic rights. In these publicity campaigns, political parties should present their manifesto, which must mention the future policies related to the betterment of young people. For example, a similar initiative was taken in Japan, during door-to-door campaign, they include offices, schools, and colleges and educate them which results in 70% rise in youth turn out in very next elections.
To conclude, young adults, are unaware of the repercussions about not voting for the right candidate, which cause a focus shift from young public to the elderly, due to this they could be deprived of their rights, which can be addressed by educating young ones about the risks associated with this
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23841059603 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7478995092 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556291390728 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.9539067339 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.2 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203146828802 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813031447711 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440376449771 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126070046201 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406985671277 0.056905535591 72% => OK
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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