In some countries, younger people are neglecting their right to vote. What problems does this cause and what are some of the possible solutions.
Undoubtedly, government has provided a unique identity to all individuals by giving them right to choose a political leader. It is provided that in these days young ones does not use this right. While i believe that this trend has some potential reasons and many effective measures can be taken to sort out this issue.
On the one hand, the phenomenon of not using the voting rights by youngsters has ample of reasons. Firstly, in the modern age, adults are not aware of the political conditions of the country as they are under the great influence of technical advancements and do not focus on the global issues. Therefore, majority of masses waste their time on using cell phones and computes and do not know the true sense of their rights. Secondly, the another major cause is lack of interest in government activities as a few young ones do not take vested interest in elections as they may tend to other subjects and career options such as singing, business, medical, agriculture. Thus, they do not go for voting on the time of elections. Finally, people have their own personal choices and they do not choose any candidate because they might do not like them. For example- in democratic countries it is the right of public to choose a generous and experienced leader for the well- being of the country. However, nowadays in some countries the senior citizens are chosen as a chief minister or prime minister of the country. Young generation may like young leaders for the smooth running of the country. So, because of opposite views they overlook elections and giving votes.
On the other hand, there are plenty of solutions to eliminate these rising problems. First of all, higher authorities must create awareness among adults about the significance of their rights. As if they know that they are entitled to choose their political leader, they would never miss their right to vote. In addition to this, encouraging young ones towards serving the country can have long lasting effects as they should be motivated to work for the welfare of the nation by choosing a literate and senior leader. As a consequent, they would come to know the value of their votes.
To conclude, Although i think that in the contemporary era teenagers do not take interest in politics, many solutions can be implemented to sort out this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, i think, in addition, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1935.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86180904523 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57925679058 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520100502513 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9710751872 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.842105263 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9473684211 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26315789474 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171424439761 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536237954969 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349098236458 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106072171067 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338284115044 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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