Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from prison. What do you think are the cause of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?
This is a fact that criminal activities are increasing day by day. It is provided that offenders tend to commit crimes a second time when they come back from jail. There are plethora of potential reasons for this phenomenon and several measures can be applied for reducing illegal activities in society.
On the one hand, for plenty of causes offenders commit crimes repeatedly. Firstly, the primary reason is the behaviour of people with them as when they are released from a longer imprisonment community do not accept them as a member which makes them feel alone and frustrated. It leads to boost in crimes as intimates think that they are regarded as bad by individuals around them and they are unable to become a well-behaved and responsible person. Secondly, unemployment is another big reason of promoting offensive behaviour as employers reject them because of their previous criminal records and they remain jobless. Therefore. in order to meet their basic needs they make robberies, murders and break laws to earn money. Finally, shorter imprisonment is also contributes in rising number of murders and other crimes as if they know that they will be released after one or two years, they go for committing crimes again as they do not fear of strict lawful activities.
On the other hand, many solutions can be applied to sort out these serious issues. First of all, higher authorities must provide employment opportunities to criminals as majority of people choose to earn money in illegal way when they are unemployed and if they would have jobs to support them, they are less likely to repeat crimes. So, government can reduce criminality by opening vistas for prisoners. In addition to this, community should change behave with them and should treat them as a good human as if they would have friends in the society, they
will not harm them and instead of putting them in risk they will protect them. Besides this, authorities should create awareness and educate them in an effort to motivate them to do social welfare as sometimes lack of awareness and any kind of greed makes them commit crimes. For example, juvenile delinquency is encouraged by convincing them to commit crimes as young ones do not what is acceptable. People give them greed of money in exchange for making offences for them.
To conclude, Although there are many causes for committing crimes repeatedly by prisoners after completing a sentence, many solutions can be implemented to get positive results for the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as for, for example, in addition, kind of, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2098.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 418.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01913875598 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66014078287 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531100478469 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 660.6 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0487487351 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.411764706 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5882352941 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.52941176471 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237578850257 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857145818602 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476162344986 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144272609574 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382339175514 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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