There are many people who go to live in different countries. To what extent should people be allowed to move freely between countries and live where they choose? What are the benefits and drawbacks of this?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
This is a fact that many people tend to emigrant to overseas countries in today’s world. While i believe that individuals who are shifting in other nations can get various benefits, i also insist on the view that allowing more and more masses to foreign countries might have detrimental impact on the well- being of their country of origin.
On the one hand, by exploring other countries people can get a number of advantages. Firstly, the citizens of a developing nation may not access facilities such as health care, education, well- established infrastructure and other amenities. In other words, in poor nations these services are not undeveloped and inaccessible. Therefore, the figure for people going abroad is increasing. Secondly, after completing graduation or post graduation adults seek for a relevant job in order to be independent and support their family financially. However, they are unable to find a profession in progressing nations that leads to unemployment among youngsters. As a result, in order to get good employment and career opportunities they are moving to richer nations. Finally, in todays’s materialistic world individuals want their high status among others in society. So, they can boost their living standard and get success by living in a fortune nation. For example- they can earn money to afford the expenditure of hospitals, education institutes and shopping centres that would improve their well- being.
On the other hand, letting everyone to go in other parts of the world without barriers can have huge potential downsides. First of all, if qualified professionals choose to pursue their career in other progressed nations. People in less fortune countries become deprive of these necessary services. For example, teachers and doctors prefer other nations and provide their services there which cause many obstacles for natives of the country. Consequently, poorer nations can not be promoted due to less contribution by public as if youth is going abroad for career purposes. no one will make efforts in the progress of poor nation. In addition to this, when huge number of adults work in their local country it aids in uplifting the economic conditions in the nation. Whereas, working in other country will help in boosting the foreign economy. That is why, people would pay income tax in other countries instead of their own and country can not compete with others due to lack of skilled labour and finance.
To conclude, Although i think that this is a good idea for qualified people to be independent and experienced by working in other country, in this way they are not able to contribute in the wealth of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, i think, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2245.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 436.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14908256881 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80912558608 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522935779817 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 687.6 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0760769903 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.045454545 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3181818182 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201834467796 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654729707989 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510049205814 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142311331101 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209789771545 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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