There are many people who go to live in different countries. To what extent should people be allowed to move freely between countries and live where they choose? What are the benefits and drawbacks of this?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Nowaday's, human immigration has been a widespread phenomenan. while some people believe that it should be limited, ristricted or banned in some cases, others think that relocating is a healthy phenomenan that should not be ristricted with any limits. I completely agree with the later opinion. And this essay is going to discuss both advantages and disadvantages of such incident.
On the one hand, those who argued against immigration, claims that the increasing number of foreigners in developed countries may lead to changes in the fabric of such society. because of their different languages, cultural norms or religions, their increasing number, over the number or original residences, probably leading to loosing connections with the original culture among new generations. Germany for example, have been facing a huge number of Syrian refugees, with their main religion, Islam, hence resulted in building enormous mosques for their praying retuals. Another example is Michegen, a US province, that have more than three million arab residents. When you walk along the city, you can not only recognise the arabic language slogans and adverts on restaurants and other public buildings, but also you can hear their mother language spoken more than you will hear English.
On the other hand, In today's world, the benefits of unlimited abilities to settle in any country around the world can either be economic or humanitarian. First and foremost, in a world that evokes rapidly, the paramount facilites to be considered about both local citizins or new immigrants are their skills, knowledge and experience. If we are aiming to improve our economy, we are always in a steep need for foreign experiences to nourish our local workforce, regardless of their cultures or religions. Canada, for istance, accepts more than three thousand new perminant resident every month, who are being accepted according to their skills and experience. Additionally, they might be accepted for human reasons like war in their original countries. this not only leads to building stronger economy for Canadians but also gives a world-appealing sense of humanity and peace.
In conclusion, while some people claims that the number of immigrants should be limited because of social and culture issues, I belive that the economic and humanity advantages of allowing individuals to relocate can outweigh any disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2038.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42021276596 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84056498183 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587765957447 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1168004969 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.375 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142629147219 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461071377088 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427265105631 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931400618234 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360268988735 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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