Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business, others prefer to work for an employer.
Would you rather be self-employed, work for someone else, or own a business.
The argument over whether self-employment is preferable or working for a company is better has not been settled yet. Some would argue that working as an individual contractor or sole proprietor is advantageous, while others believe that serving an employer beget more benefit. However, in my opinion, a fixed ramification in return for those services which are given to the company is superior.
To embark with, people loathe to take dictations from others and they want to be their own boss. This is to say that this is against their self-esteem to obey someone because these people are good at management and organizing skills on their own. Hence, they do not need any guidance or supervision of any other person. For example, the owner of the worldly famous ABN company reveals that when he worked for an employer he was unable to survive in the company due to the contradiction of thoughts. However, I believe that as a business owner, it is obvious that there are a lot of risks associated with them which are worth considering: profit and loss, debt, currency fluctuation, and market trends.
On the other hand, some people prefer to be an employee, since it is risk-free. Because they realize that they will have a fixed amount of salary in their account at the end of the month irrespective of business trends of the company they are working for. The company is responsible for any loss, and the employee’s salary has nothing to do with it because it is fixed when a person signs a contract with the company. Similarly, many companies are offering an attractive salary package for their staff which includes old-age benefits, house, medical, child education allowance.
To conclude, people may vary in their opinion about means of earning whether through becoming a businessman or a professional employee. I personally prefer to join an organization where I can find job security to win bread for my family.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, similarly, so, while, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98456790123 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8207310038 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570987654321 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4521966677 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.357142857 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307821983651 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103225722496 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686595620804 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188875307893 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555901621177 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.