Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion
Many corporations have restricted their employees to wear a uniform during working hours. While uniforms may hinder the uniqueness of an individual, I believe that these are imperative for the safety of workers.
The primary advantage of uniform is to protect staff from a hazardous situation. This is to say because many industries have installed heavy machinery for manufacturing of their products, and wearing loose clothing or jewellery may jeopardize their lives by getting stuck in these machines. For example, in Russia, it was reported in 2018, in Daily Times that two factory workers lost their lives due to an outfit they were wearing during batch manufacturing and cloth stuff catch fire and burnt them to death. I believe that making uniform an obligation for employees begets benefit in terms of personal safety.
Every individual has a desire to look different than others and it is a part of human nature. While making uniform a compulsion may restrict an individual’s identity, because every person has their own way of carrying cloths which makes them unique among others. Therefore, most staff do not like to wear the uniform provided by the company as it results in affecting their appearance. For example, a survey report published in a newspaper about making uniform compulsory and 75% of workers denied wearing a uniform. However, I believe that at workplace focus should be on human safety instead of giving importance to the individual's appearance.
To conclude, employees of many departments are now obliged to have the same attire at the workplace, although having the same costume reduces specialty of an individual, this act would save staff members from getting into trouble.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...dividual has a desire to look different than others and it is a part of human nature...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ety instead of giving importance to the individuals appearance. To conclude, employees o...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'reduces'' or 'redux's'?
Suggestion: reduces'; redux's
...place, although having the same costume reduces specialty of an individual, this act wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23550724638 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82943642091 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601449275362 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8529333798 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.416666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225933870149 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849544098104 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367905362328 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131757382403 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348155431102 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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