In many countries, the government prioritizes economic growth above all other
concerns.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion
It is argued that higher authorities of many nations are focusing more on an upsurge of economic growth and giving least importance to the other issues. While the main advantage of this is the prosperity of the nation, I believe that excessive pollution is a serious drawback.
The primary benefit of focusing more on economic prosperity is that it results in a wealthier nation because governmental elites emphasize on establishing more industries to increase their products. In other words, it reduces poverty by offering employment and giving high wages to the workers so that they flourish in terms of their personal growth. As more people receive a huge amount of salary it raises their living standard and results in up-gradation of the monetary status of the nation. For example, in 2010 Chines government introduced a policy which focuses more on the living standard of its nations due to which it has become the second-largest economy in the world. However, I believe that this focus raises many other serious concerns not only to the country but all over the world.
a major disadvantage of giving more importance to economic growth is it gives rise to serious environmental concerns. This is to say that when more industries are established it contributes more towards polluting the atmosphere because industries are the main cause of air, water, and land pollution. For example, Ukraine government set goals to increase their GDP to significant levels but an annual report published by United Nations stated that annual contribution of Ukraine in polluting environment is 5% and they need to adopt sustainable development goals.
To conclude, the government of many states emphasizes more on economic development, although it reduces poverty among the nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: giving the least
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Suggestion: A
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, while, for example, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27719298246 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90962466074 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522807017544 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.8760469217 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.727272727 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143282805843 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659473043735 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627120474925 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105333523351 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223237101878 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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