In many countries, the government prioritises economic growth above all other concerns.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.
Economic development is extremely important for any country and many countries keep it at the top of their priority. Their are certain ups and downs of this approach, although I believe the disadvantages outweighs the advantages of keeping financial growth prior to other important affairs of a country such as education and agriculture, in the priority list.
Economy is the cornerstone of a nation's development. Without a robust economic backbone, no other affairs of a country can be looked after with confidence, at least not without an aid from some other country. For example developed country such as Australia or Canada that are also economically strong and are now focusing more on other matters, would not have that benefit to be able to invest on other priority to the extent they are doing if they did not have a good supply of fund at their hand. Hence, there are clear advantages of focusing on economic growth.
However, there are other areas government need to focus simultaneously if they look for a sustainable economic growth and not just a fluke. Focusing only on economy of a country leaving behind more important areas such as educational sector or agricultural sector will not give the growth longevity because a huge amount of money will go out just to feed own people if proper focus is not given on agriculture and also there will not have any future generation to take forward the development if proper education is not supplied. For instance, for developing countries like Bangladesh it is probably more important to address the basic need of the nation such as food, education, basic treatment and accommodation than focusing only on economic growth beyond everything else.
Therefore, having discussed both pros and cons I believe giving extra focus on economy may take governments eye off the other important areas. Rather, a balanced importance need to be given on all the important areas as mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, at least, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09316770186 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82066916357 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527950310559 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.2698967295 49.4020404114 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.090909091 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2727272727 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186560678477 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816141745365 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510567945382 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115514919434 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00839653709958 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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