In many countries, the government prioritizes economic growth above all other
concerns.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.
The issue of prioritizing economic activity over others by many countries has been debata-ble since the advent of globalization. I believe that despite the disadvantages, such as in-creased environment pollution and potential inflation of prices, improved standard of liv-ing and better employment opportunities eclipses them. In this essay I will discuss both ad-vantages and disadvantages by illustrating the economic recovery by India during a pan-demic and also WHO’s forecast on causes of global warming.
On one hand, putting economic growth ahead of others will better the lives of majority of population. The central reason for this two fold, primarily, greater employment opportuni-ties to the unemployed. Unemployment is a pressing issue in many countries which can be tackled by improving the economic state of a nation. Focusing on economic development will attract many companies to invest in the country resulting in more skilled and unskilled jobs to people. Secondly, enhance standard of living . More jobs results in increased gdp and higher disposable income. This results in demand for better products and lifestyle which entices many multi national companies to launch their products to people. To illus-trate this, the growth story of Indian economy can be entitled to a disruptive economic pol-icy launched by the government in 1993 by liberalizing and privatizing industries which resulted in a consistent double digit growth for next 10 years. Therefore it is conclusively clear that improved wealth creation activities has holistic effect on the lives of people
On the other hand, there are long term effects of economic centered development. The two central drawbacks of it are Environmental pollution and inflation. Inflation of prices is due to supply unable to meet the sudden increase in demand which consequently enables sup-pliers to increase the prices. Furthermore, more economic activity leads to more produc-tion which will result in rise of carbon dioxide levels in atmosphere. More waste is generat-ed and also increases deforestation to accommodate various factories. Thus it is possible to state that focusing on economic activity has disadvantages in long run.
To recapitulate, although there is environmental pollution with increased economic activi-ty, better jobs and raise in the standard of living has immediate effect on population which eclipses the aforementioned drawbacks. These can also be mitigated by careful planning by bureaucrats and governments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2137.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66843501326 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17663625375 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543766578249 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 684.0 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8779338407 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.473684211 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8421052632 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36842105263 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169202814785 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498801980483 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559033532936 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962756276609 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527170632856 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.