A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time in this summer. He/She has asked for your advice.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday.
Describe some possible disadvantages.
Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer.
Dear Jay,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of health and spirits. I’m delighted to hear that finally you have made your mind for a camping holiday. As I know you have been planning for this since long but being a doctor you are always snowed under work. Personally, I think it would be a great experience for you as it will give you a break through monotonous routine.
Besides fun and excitement, you should keep few things in mind while planning vacations as it contains drawbacks too. During camping, there is danger of insects bites which often leads to a life-threatening condition. So, I would suggest you to add insect repellent, leather boots, and a first aid box in you backpack.
I would really like to join you, but unfortunately, I have been going through hectic routine these days. As you know my mother is suffering from Leukemia, I have to take her to hospital for chemotherapy on regular basis. There is no one at home to look after her during my absence. Anyways, I wish you a happy and safe vacation.
I hope you would consider my suggestions.
Your best friend,
Sarah
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, besides, but, finally, first, if, look, really, so, while, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65989847716 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65512805065 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654822335025 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1716980123 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6153846154 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1538461538 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 4.34317383033 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237778548815 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877060956356 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960999278296 0.0603063233224 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103260909688 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867530889378 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.