You have unexpectedly come into a large sum of money and you want to share this good news with your friend Write a letter to your friend In your letter explain where the money came from say what you intend to do with the money invite your friend to celebr

Essay topics:

You have unexpectedly come into a large sum of money and you want to share this good news

with your friend.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter

● explain where the money came from

● say what you intend to do with the money

● invite your friend to celebrate your good fortune.

Dear Jay,

I'm fine, and I hope you are doing good too. I feel delighted to share a piece of good news that I won a prize bond, which I had bought a few months ago.

As you know, I had purchased some prize bond from my pocket-money. Although I was not sure at the time of purchase, I will really win it. But, when I received a call from a bank representative that I had won the prize of amount one million dollars, my joy knew no bounds, and I thanked God for His mercy upon me.

What is more important, because it is a huge amount, it should be spent wisely. So I’m planning that I'll divide this money into chunks, and donate a handsome amount for charity to an organization which is located. I'll also pay my university fees for the remaining semesters.

I’d like to invite you this weekend to be a part of my happiness. I’m planning to throw a party at a five-star restaurant to celebrate this great news. If you are not available this weekend, I will shift this event to the next date for your convenience.

Let me know about your plans at the earliest.

Best regard,

Saira Bano

Votes
Average: 8.7 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Jay, Im fine, and I hope you are doing good too...
^^
Line 11, column 220, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...ty to an organization which is located. Ill also pay my university fees for the rem...
^^^
Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Best'.
Suggestion: The Best
...about your plans at the earliest. Best regard, Saira Bano
^^^^
Line 25, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arliest. Best regard, Saira Bano
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, i feel, you know, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45410628019 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55791513216 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657004830918 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2981143417 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9230769231 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18645624106 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618451784505 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590515006678 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964421045431 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333510521782 0.0580467560999 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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