You have unexpectedly come into a large sum of money and you want to share this good news
with your friend.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
● explain where the money came from
● say what you intend to do with the money
● invite your friend to celebrate your good fortune.
Dear John,
Hello! I am at pink of my health and hope you're sailing at same boat. Gladly, I am inscribing this letter to inform you that I won a lucky draw of 10000 Canadian Dollars last Friday. As you know that I don't believe in the windfall gains such as lucky draws, but when I bought my new I phone it was hidden a surprise by company to its luckiest customer.
When I heard about this money , I was on the seventh heaven. Now, I want to share this fortune with underprivileged people,thus I am crafting out a trust which would participate in philanthropic activities. Although the charitable works of Canadian regimes are admirable, I aspire to serve the patients of COVID-19 through my Trust.
Franking speaking, I am planning to celebrate this special occasion of my life with you, thus I would have scheduled a party on the following month. Please don't make any lame excuse to skip this party, your presence really have a great importance in this celebration.
Take care and stay healthy.
Best Wishes
Navdeep Puri
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...llo! I am at pink of my health and hope youre sailing at same boat. Gladly, I am insc...
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Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...Dollars last Friday. As you know that I dont believe in the windfall gains such as l...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e by company to its luckiest customer. When I heard about this money , I was on...
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Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...omer. When I heard about this money , I was on the seventh heaven. Now, I wan...
^^
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , thus
...this fortune with underprivileged people,thus I am crafting out a trust which would p...
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Line 7, column 157, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... a party on the following month. Please dont make any lame excuse to skip this party...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, thus, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75138121547 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72141697892 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696132596685 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9704075447 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193912377302 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608343050541 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456251017034 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935784963812 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610203607281 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.