Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like them very much. Why do people take part in dangerous sports? Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers.

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Some sports are extremely dangerous but many people still like them very much. Why do people take part in dangerous sports? Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers.

In recent years we have seen a considerable rise in dangerous or extreme sports. This essay shall discuss some of the main reasons why people engage in such sports and suggest ways in which some risks involved in such sports can be reduced. The main reason why people go for dangerous sports is that they get the thrill out of them. They like taking risks. They like to challenge their abilities and potentials. They feel a sense of satisfaction when they come face to face with fears while bungee jumping, rock climbing and so on. In addition, going through a dangerous experience gives them courage and confidence to face the hurdles of their daily life. Another reason for pursuing such sports is that there is a lot of fame and money involved in them. They get attention by doing stunts on motorcycles and jumping from tall buildings. They make headlines in newspapers and TV News Channels. They feel great when their name comes in the Guinness Book of World Records. Once they get famous they get a lot of money also. For instance, many businesses hire them to endorse their products. They also get jobs on the basis of such skills. Many steps can be taken to reduce the risks are that involved. Firstly, these sports should be done under strict supervision. All safety precautions should be taken. Such sports should be performed after sufficient training and under supervision of adults. Sport companies which cater to such sports should require a license for providing such training. Some people suggest banning some sports. However, I do not believe that banning is a good solution. We all know that forbidden fruits taste sweeter and people will do such sports in hiding which would increase the risks involved. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, people do such sports for fun, for money and for fame. However, such sports should be performed after sufficient training from licensed companies and under some supervision.

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...nd jumping from tall buildings. They make headlines in newspapers and TV...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...mping from tall buildings. They make headlines in newspapers and TV News...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... tall buildings. They make headlines in newspapers and TV News Channels....
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ll buildings. They make headlines in newspapers and TV News Channels. Th...
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...ey make headlines in newspapers and TV News Channels. They feel great ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...make headlines in newspapers and TV News Channels. They feel great when...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...headlines in newspapers and TV News Channels. They feel great when thei...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... newspapers and TV News Channels. They feel great when their name comes ...
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...wspapers and TV News Channels. They feel great when their name comes in...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...rs and TV News Channels. They feel great when their name comes in the ...
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... TV News Channels. They feel great when their name comes in the Guinne...
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...News Channels. They feel great when their name comes in the Guinness Bo...
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...ls. They feel great when their name comes in the Guinness Book of Worl...
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...ey feel great when their name comes in the Guinness Book of World Reco...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...feel great when their name comes in the Guinness Book of World Records....
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... great when their name comes in the Guinness Book of World Records. Onc...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...en their name comes in the Guinness Book of World Records. Once they g...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...eir name comes in the Guinness Book of World Records. Once they get fa...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...name comes in the Guinness Book of World Records. Once they get famous...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...omes in the Guinness Book of World Records. Once they get famous they ...
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Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he Guinness Book of World Records. Once they get famous they get a lot ...
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...uinness Book of World Records. Once they get famous they get a lot of...
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...s Book of World Records. Once they get famous they get a lot of money...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ok of World Records. Once they get famous they get a lot of money als...
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...World Records. Once they get famous they get a lot of money also. For ...
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... Records. Once they get famous they get a lot of money also. For insta...
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...rds. Once they get famous they get a lot of money also. For instance, ...
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.... Once they get famous they get a lot of money also. For instance, ma...
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...ce they get famous they get a lot of money also. For instance, many b...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...get famous they get a lot of money also. For instance, many businesses ...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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... they get a lot of money also. For instance, many businesses hire them ...
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... a lot of money also. For instance, many businesses hire them to endors...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...t of money also. For instance, many businesses hire them to endorse the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... also. For instance, many businesses hire them to endorse their products...
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... For instance, many businesses hire them to endorse their products. The...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... instance, many businesses hire them to endorse their products. They als...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...tance, many businesses hire them to endorse their products. They also ge...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...any businesses hire them to endorse their products. They also get jobs ...
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...sinesses hire them to endorse their products. They also get jobs on the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...hem to endorse their products. They also get jobs on the basis of such...
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...ndorse their products. They also get jobs on the basis of such skills. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... their products. They also get jobs on the basis of such skills. Many s...
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...eir products. They also get jobs on the basis of such skills. Many steps...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...products. They also get jobs on the basis of such skills. Many steps can...
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...s. They also get jobs on the basis of such skills. Many steps can be t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...They also get jobs on the basis of such skills. Many steps can be taken...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...also get jobs on the basis of such skills. Many steps can be taken to ...
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...the basis of such skills. Many steps can be taken to reduce the risks ...
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...basis of such skills. Many steps can be taken to reduce the risks are ...
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...s of such skills. Many steps can be taken to reduce the risks are that...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...such skills. Many steps can be taken to reduce the risks are that invol...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... skills. Many steps can be taken to reduce the risks are that involved....
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.... Many steps can be taken to reduce the risks are that involved. Firstly...
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...y steps can be taken to reduce the risks are that involved. Firstly, th...
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... can be taken to reduce the risks are that involved. Firstly, these sp...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... be taken to reduce the risks are that involved. Firstly, these sports ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...taken to reduce the risks are that involved. Firstly, these sports shoul...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...he risks are that involved. Firstly, these sports should be done under s...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ks are that involved. Firstly, these sports should be done under strict ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... that involved. Firstly, these sports should be done under strict supervis...
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...nvolved. Firstly, these sports should be done under strict supervision. Al...
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...Firstly, these sports should be done under strict supervision. All safety...
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..., these sports should be done under strict supervision. All safety preca...
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... sports should be done under strict supervision. All safety precautions ...
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...e done under strict supervision. All safety precautions should be taken. ...
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...under strict supervision. All safety precautions should be taken. Such ...
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... supervision. All safety precautions should be taken. Such sports shou...
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...ision. All safety precautions should be taken. Such sports should be p...
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...n. All safety precautions should be taken. Such sports should be perfo...
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...safety precautions should be taken. Such sports should be performed afte...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... precautions should be taken. Such sports should be performed after suf...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ions should be taken. Such sports should be performed after sufficient ...
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...ould be taken. Such sports should be performed after sufficient trainin...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...n. Such sports should be performed after sufficient training and under ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...uch sports should be performed after sufficient training and under superv...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... should be performed after sufficient training and under supervision of a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...e performed after sufficient training and under supervision of adults. Sp...
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...formed after sufficient training and under supervision of adults. Sport ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... after sufficient training and under supervision of adults. Sport compani...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...cient training and under supervision of adults. Sport companies which cat...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...t training and under supervision of adults. Sport companies which cater ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... under supervision of adults. Sport companies which cater to such sports...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...pervision of adults. Sport companies which cater to such sports should r...
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... adults. Sport companies which cater to such sports should require a li...
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...ults. Sport companies which cater to such sports should require a licens...
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... Sport companies which cater to such sports should require a license for...
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...companies which cater to such sports should require a license for provid...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...s which cater to such sports should require a license for providing suc...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...cater to such sports should require a license for providing such traini...
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...er to such sports should require a license for providing such training....
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...uch sports should require a license for providing such training. Some p...
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...sports should require a license for providing such training. Some people...
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...uld require a license for providing such training. Some people suggest b...
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...training. Some people suggest banning some sports. However, I do not bel...
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...uggest banning some sports. However, I do not believe that banning is ...
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... banning some sports. However, I do not believe that banning is a good...
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...ing some sports. However, I do not believe that banning is a good sol...
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... sports. However, I do not believe that banning is a good solution. W...
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...ver, I do not believe that banning is a good solution. We all know th...
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... I do not believe that banning is a good solution. We all know that ...
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... do not believe that banning is a good solution. We all know that for...
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...not believe that banning is a good solution. We all know that forbidden...
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... banning is a good solution. We all know that forbidden fruits taste sw...
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...ng is a good solution. We all know that forbidden fruits taste sweeter ...
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... a good solution. We all know that forbidden fruits taste sweeter and ...
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...solution. We all know that forbidden fruits taste sweeter and people wil...
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.... We all know that forbidden fruits taste sweeter and people will do s...
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...ll know that forbidden fruits taste sweeter and people will do such sp...
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... that forbidden fruits taste sweeter and people will do such sports in ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... forbidden fruits taste sweeter and people will do such sports in hidi...
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...ruits taste sweeter and people will do such sports in hiding which woul...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...s taste sweeter and people will do such sports in hiding which would i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... and people will do such sports in hiding which would increase the risk...
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Line 1, column 1949, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ople will do such sports in hiding which would increase the risks invol...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...o such sports in hiding which would increase the risks involved. To pu...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ports in hiding which would increase the risks involved. To put it in ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... in hiding which would increase the risks involved. To put it in a n...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...iding which would increase the risks involved. To put it in a nutshell...
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... would increase the risks involved. To put it in a nutshell, I pen d...
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...ld increase the risks involved. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down ...
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Line 1, column 2005, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ncrease the risks involved. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down sayi...
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...ase the risks involved. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying ...
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... the risks involved. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that...
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...e risks involved. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, ...
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...nvolved. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, people do ...
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...lved. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, people do su...
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... To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, people do such s...
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... put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, people do such sports ...
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... in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, people do such sports for fu...
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... nutshell, I pen down saying that, people do such sports for fun, for...
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...ll, I pen down saying that, people do such sports for fun, for money ...
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... I pen down saying that, people do such sports for fun, for money and...
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...n down saying that, people do such sports for fun, for money and for ...
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... saying that, people do such sports for fun, for money and for fame. H...
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...ng that, people do such sports for fun, for money and for fame. Howeve...
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...at, people do such sports for fun, for money and for fame. However, su...
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...people do such sports for fun, for money and for fame. However, such s...
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... do such sports for fun, for money and for fame. However, such sports ...
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... sports for fun, for money and for fame. However, such sports should b...
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...n, for money and for fame. However, such sports should be performed aft...
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...r money and for fame. However, such sports should be performed after su...
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... and for fame. However, such sports should be performed after sufficient...
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...r fame. However, such sports should be performed after sufficient traini...
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...ame. However, such sports should be performed after sufficient training ...
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...er, such sports should be performed after sufficient training from licen...
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...ch sports should be performed after sufficient training from licensed com...
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...should be performed after sufficient training from licensed companies and ...
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... performed after sufficient training from licensed companies and under so...
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...ormed after sufficient training from licensed companies and under some su...
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...ient training from licensed companies and under some supervision.
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... training from licensed companies and under some supervision.
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...ng from licensed companies and under some supervision.
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...om licensed companies and under some supervision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84084084084 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43631470115 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534534534535 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.219009777 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.1666666667 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.875 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 7.06120827912 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 297.0 5.01903807615 5917% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281885248275 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802288073483 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775700952423 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281885248275 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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