Some think that it is better to get information or advice from other people, while others believe one can get any information or advice from the Internet or books. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Sometimes, a small bit of information or advice plays a vital role in one's sphere. It is always a debatable proposition among many people, that internet is a best option to get these advice's or information than asking people. While some trust the online information but I stand with the people who are on other side of the spectrum.
From the dawn of invention of internet, World Wide Web has become a huge information hub. Although these details used to be costly at the beginning of the era, due to the heavy competition they are available to everyone freely. One can sit at home and get an expert advice on a press of the button. Moreover the data on the internet is up-to-date which makes it an ultra prominent resource for information and advice's. In brief these are the main advantages of getting advice's from internet
On the other hand, many experts cite that taking advice from a machine is completely preposterous than asking a well-known person. Since, the data available on the internet is not completely trustworthy people cannot take risk on the web. Moreover, the blogs and forms are mainly used to take information and mislead the users. On such incident took place in US recently, people who are getting advice from internet for life insurance filled an online form, and this form is sent to all the major insurance companies which is a big crime. In short, taking advice from a person is safer and people can get experienced advice and details
To sum-up, there are many speculations of getting advice as people today are more tending towards internet, but how far it is safe? And is it trust-able? According to me getting advice from a person is better than asking a bot.
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| 2019-08-17 | bhatvishal@ | 67 | view |
| 2019-08-17 | bhatvishal@ | 61 | view |
| 2019-07-19 | Shane | 73 | view |
| 2019-06-16 | Amir Nazaripoor | 73 | view |
| 2019-06-13 | Amir Nazaripoor | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'expert advice'.
Suggestion: expert advice
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...antages of getting advices from internet On the other hand, many experts cite tha...
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...terous than asking a well-known person. Since, the data available on the internet is ...
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, while, in brief, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61352888561 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533783783784 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8760551101 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.428571429 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393933322697 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130860993217 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848151859876 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251854239481 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395537136305 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.