Some think most crimes are the result of circumstances e.g. poverty and other social problems.
Others believe that most crime is caused by people who are bad by nature.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people argue that the majority of crimes are due to factors prevalent in society, while other would say that it is the bad nature of people which leads them to committing different offences. This essay will discuss both views, followed by a reasoned conclusion that most crimes are due to external factors which influence people.
On the one hand, some say that most people who are innately bad are involved in criminal activities. This is because their bad nature pleases them when they do any crime, like hurting others. For them, doing crimes is just a matter of enjoyment. For example, a recent documentary by the Australia 60 Minutes showed an interview of a culprit who was involved in sexual assault of teenagers, and he informed how amazing he felt when he did this crime. However, I believe that this happens rarely, because there are some external factors that are likely to influence people to committing crimes.
On the other hand, some argue that most crimes are due to social problems. Being human beings, we have to live in a society where we are likely to get influence of many things. The majority of people take these so deeply that they do not see any option other than doing crimes. For example, a recent report by the Jhang Police has shown that almost 60% of criminals who were in prison conducted robbery because they did not have enough money to survive. I agree that the main reason of crimes is due to such factors which are linked to society they live in.
In conclusion, although having a bad nature can result in crimes, I believe that getting influenced by societal issues is the main reason due to which most people become criminals
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 479, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'rarely' is usually put before the verb 'happens'.
Suggestion: rarely happens
...his crime. However, I believe that this happens rarely, because there are some external factor...
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Line 2, column 593, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... influence people to committing crimes. On the other hand, some argue that most ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ue to which most people become criminals
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 21.0 7.30460921844 287% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7133105802 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33617685114 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518771331058 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5069823605 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.230769231 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26043546325 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106364439169 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862559314915 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167553406431 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286303344309 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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