Many people opine that few television shows, video games and other such activities have a negative influence on children. Due to the increase in the violent content in TV shows and video games, young people minds are getting affected to a great extent. In order to overcome this situation, parents should intervene by changing the selection of shows and limiting gaming hours.
Leisure activities are important for children for their overall development. These young people usually prefer to watch their favorite show or play a video game in their free time. However, the major concern for parents is the content of such activities. Television is full of shows involving crime dramas and other violent behavioral traits. Similarly games also involve where players need to make killing strategies. Studies has shown that children involved in playing or watching such unnatural behavior programs have a tendency to reflect more aggressive nature as compared to others.
Also, children involved in such non physical activities are more prone to health related issues. Today many people face the problem of obesity at a young age due to sedentary life style. So, it is important for parents to encourage their child in doing some outdoor activities, so to have a healthy life ahead.
Having said that, it becomes necessary to have parental guidance to avoid a child to become aggressive in nature. Parents need to keep a check on what their offspring's are watching on the TV. Also, they need to limit the time for playing video games. Apart from this, parents should encourage children to play more physical games like Football, Basketball or cricket. Such games will also help to develop social skills and help to understand the importance of team work.
In conclusion, television drama and excessive gaming have adverse effect on mental behaviors ans it also affects physical health. So parents interference is necessary to help children to select right shows and encourage them to play more physical games rather than computer games.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
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Line 9, column 84, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'behaviors'' or 'behavior's'?
Suggestion: behaviors'; behavior's
...ve gaming have adverse effect on mental behaviors ans it also affects physical health. So...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, similarly, so, apart from, in conclusion, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20303030303 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5392221682 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557575757576 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9389917072 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.3684210526 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3684210526 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.10526315789 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164714863593 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545245462231 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379288806906 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973238264041 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360621229789 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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