Many people in different country follow a trend of throwing away the products early, even though they can be utilized for a long run. A major reason in doing so is the availability and affordability of the products in the market. Such trend has lead to environmental damage to a great extent, in order to solve this problem, individuals should come to the term of using products wisely.
People have a tendency to get attracted towards the new products available in the market. Also, companies creates adverts in such a way that converts needs in to wants for a particular item. Another reason that results in increase in the purchase is its affordability. As, companies sell different products at very reasonable price, more people are able to afford these products. Most of the products that people use for a short amount of time are usually the electronic items like mobiles, laptops and television. As the advent of technology, new gadgets are introduced in the market every day, attracting a number of customers to buy them and this results in discarding their old ones. Another reason is people are lazy to repair a product or instrument when has crashed. Also, sometimes buying a new item is cheaper than repairing the older one and it can be time saving as well.
Such action results in number of problems for the people as well as for the surroundings. Firstly, it damages the environment, as these waste piles up in the landfills contributing to more garbage production. The e-waste produced are mostly non-degradable, that remains in the soil for a long period of time leading to soil pollution. Also, when an electronic item is incinerated, it generates fumes with toxic substance, that leads to health issues when inhaled. Also, when household items like furniture are thrown away regularly, this affects the forest area, as lots of trees ate cut down in order to produce new ones. A survey conducted by Real Estate agency stated that people throw away a lot of furniture items every year in order to purchase a new model of the same piece.
In conclusion, as day by day new inventions with better technology will keep coming in the market, creating a want for people to buy such products and throw their older ones. This will affect the environment as this discarded products will end up in the dump yard leading to soil and air pollution. Also, a lot of trees are being destroyed to meet the demand of people for new designs of furniture leading to deforestation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...le, that remains in the soil for a long period of time leading to soil pollution. Also, when a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, well, as for, in conclusion, as well as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2065.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 427.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83606557377 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74039910464 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508196721311 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.0 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6314512381 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.25 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.35 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194251430991 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590761588469 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544639322671 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124815311341 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149559122796 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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