With the availability of good medical treatment the life expectancy of elderly people has increased. Many opine that this may lead to a financial pressure for the government whereas others argue that having more old people will help the society to grow morally. I believe, senior citizen have an important role to play to mold the next generation in becoming a better and responsible individual.
As the technology advances, the medical field is able to increase the total life expectancy in humans. This has helped to increase the survival rate of old people. For some this scenario has built up a financial stress in the healthcare system. As, a huge amount of budget goes into treating these elderly patients, who according to them do not contribute anything to the society. So, they think that instead of allotting a huge budget for senior citizen that amount should be spend on other important things like education or child care facilities. However, it is a responsibility of government to help with the treatment of old people as they were once a tax payers to the nation, and have already contributed their part to the society.
On the other hand, many people think that having elders in the society can help to impart moral values to the children. As, children are the future generation of a country, helping them to grow into better individuals is of utmost importance. Apart from that, as most of the old people are retired, they can help to look after their grand kids. Nowadays, both the parents have to work full time in order to meet both ends, grand parents are the best option to have as a care taker. They can also help to impart the family and social values in them. In India, majority of kids are raised by their grand parents, and they have shown to grow up into a lot adjusting individuals.
In conclusion, saying that elders are problem to the healthcare budget is totally illogical. They have done their part by paying taxes when they had to. Rather older people are an asset to every nation, as they can help the future generation to become a good person, by sharing valuable knowledge.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 478, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spent'?
Suggestion: spent
...or senior citizen that amount should be spend on other important things like educatio...
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Line 5, column 386, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...Nowadays, both the parents have to work full time in order to meet both ends, grand paren...
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Line 7, column 154, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Rather,
... part by paying taxes when they had to. Rather older people are an asset to every nati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, whereas, apart from, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76358695652 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53366831491 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516304347826 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9293287812 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3888888889 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180296456075 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577424024513 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468279467909 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114757569061 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309205281244 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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