Dear Sir,
I am writing in regards with the preparation of presentation for the Embryology training workshop that is going to take place on 27th December,2020.
As per our discussion, I am going to prepare a power point presentation on Cryo-preservation Techniques. So, here I will be focusing on the important aspects of Embryo as well as Oocyte freezing. I am going to divide the procedure according to the quality of Embryos and Oocytes. In the end I will mention few research papers supporting out technique and end the discussion.
I believe, this topic is going to interest many embryologist, as the technique performed by most of the IVF center's are traditional ones. This new technique had recently been introduced after a lot of research. So this topic will be of great help to others, as it possess better results with with simple procedure.
So, in order to show them the entire procedure, apart from the laptop and good connectivity, I would also like to show them the kit required to perform this technique. So I will require a Cryo Top kit with all its media details.
I hope you like the idea for conducting a presentation on this topic. Hope to see your response soon.
Yours Faithfully,
Kayra Datta
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...hop that is going to take place on 27th December,2020. As per our discussion, I am going t...
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... and Oocytes. In the end I will mention few research papers supporting out technique and end...
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...elieve, this topic is going to interest many embryologist, as the technique performed by most of ...
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...kit required to perform this technique. So I will require a Cryo Top kit with all ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88571428571 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03322493639 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62380952381 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.272797179 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9230769231 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1538461538 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137199934138 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542671058034 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622846040263 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839462760392 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078790694575 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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