One of the major concern for the agriculture sector is the increasing requirement for food products across the globe. A possible reason is the ever growing population and their dietary requirements. In order to over come this situation the government can provide farmers with more land and modern technology to cultivate more crops to meet the increasing demand for the food.
An increase in the population size is a main cause for food scarcity. The current population size is 7.8 billion, and it is still growing at a faster rate. As the population size increases globally, more food is being consumed leading to an imbalance in demand and supply chain. Apart from this, many people with high income can spend more in buying more than required food products creating a situation of scarcity for the poor. A survey conducted by Times food, stated that 60% of food waste is generated from the houses of rich people, which could rather have been used to provide for the poor people.
There arise a need to take steps in order to increase the food production. First, government shall help the farmers to have an access to more cultivable lands, which will help in more yield. Second, as the technology advances, new farming methods like good quality of fertilizers, better irrigation system, advance machine in ploughing can be of a great help to the farmers. For instance, in USA most of the work on farms are done by machines and very less labour work is required on the field. So, such technology can be shared with other countries too, that contributes major amount of food produce. Also, countries with surplus amount of food can take a responsibility to share their yield with others, so that nobody starves to death.
In conclusion, population will keep rising more and more in the coming years, so nations can come together and share their food produce to meet the demand of the world. Also, government of the countries that majors in food production, can help its farmers with better cultivable land and better farming technology.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
...vernment shall help the farmers to have an access to more cultivable lands, which will he...
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Line 7, column 316, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ble land and better farming technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, so, still, apart from, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92795389049 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57153225035 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521613832853 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4609701427 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.875 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255278611312 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970643825213 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690164194941 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1734116075 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476309514948 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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