In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. What is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
Since the inception of civilization, human being has been dependent on agriculture as it provides food, and for that reason, mankind devotes significant resources to develop the process of farming. In recent time, there is substantial progress has been observed in this aspect, but still, a major portion of people around the world remain starving. From my point of view, the faulty market mechanism is responsible for this issue and could be solved by the co-operation of the related parties.
Basically, the food market is comprised of the farmer- the initial producer and buyer, albeit international bodies, local government, intermediaries and some other beneficial groups disrupt and manipulate the market for their gain. As a result, the primary seller, who works day and night to grow crops, does not receive proper benefit, whereas end-consumers have to pay the extra price to purchase food. For example, in many developing countries, farmers very often go on protest for not getting enough money necessary to lead their life, while a lion share of the population in those countries observe famine-like situation because of the high price of food. Thus, dysfunctional market operation, reflected in the supply chain process, is the pivotal reason for this circumstance.
Interruption of the external forces to the market should be erased significantly, not only in the local arena but also on the global scale to free the world from hunger. Furthermore, all the countries should come with each other and co-operate in this subject by moderately ignoring their benefits. For instance, few countries like the USA are known for massive growth and surplus of wheat, which can easily be exported to the countries experiencing famine, rather than wasting it to make the price of the crop higher in the global market. Therefore, stakeholders, if they will, can resolve the conundrum of food shortage.
To conclude, the existing problematic structure of the market has always been looming before us, but we have not been able to address it notably while the solution might not be any behemoth task to do.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 28, Rule ID: IS_COMPRISED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of' or 'is composed of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of; is composed of
...arties. Basically, the food market is comprised of the farmer- the initial producer and bu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, still, therefore, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22287390029 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82469395693 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630498533724 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.2640251295 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.416666667 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4166666667 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129833194549 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497807212831 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449525433642 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776921820848 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569960887583 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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