It is considered that learn artwork in academy develop performance in more topics because it is simple for multi skilled fresher to known about more talented things. I accord with said notion due to they become multitalented and they can easily grow their future.
To commence with, children become skillful in all things.To elaborate it, when they learn the fine art subjects then they can find many things in another subjects. Also, they can understand the things from the pictures. They can find the answer in the pictures. For instance, a survey was conducted by the Japan university found in the 2016 that teenagers learn the thing only see the pictures and they become more talented. Hence, they can never loose their study in any subjects.
Furthermore, they can make their future. To explicate it, they can good in all subjects. when they go to study in the university they can understood the things so fast. In addition, they are in first position in any field. In future they can easily get job and their future become bright. To epitome, a headline was published in "THE MOSCOW TIMES" newspaper revealed that 74% students in America they can make their future just because of their fine art study. Therefore, they can earn more funds for their bright future.
To conclude, with the help of art they become skillful in all things and they can make their bright or good future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: To
... children become skillful in all things.To elaborate it, when they learn the fine ...
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Suggestion: lose
...me more talented. Hence, they can never loose their study in any subjects. Further...
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Suggestion: When
...cate it, they can good in all subjects. when they go to study in the university they...
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...cate it, they can good in all subjects. when they go to study in the university they...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'understand'
Suggestion: understand
... go to study in the university they can understood the things so fast. In addition, they a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, so, then, therefore, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1167.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88284518828 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40580316474 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506276150628 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.7881735176 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107320347012 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443652720766 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044257849088 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862850465608 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191279992334 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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