Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
I am analyzing the topic of earnings of sports professionals are higher than the other professionals using my everyday experience and observations. It is not surprising to see that most people think that sports professionals are being paid highly enough than other professionals. The causes of this growing topic are sports professionals have a very short career. Sports profession has a high risk of successive career. Some sports do have a chance of life threat or at least health threat.
Beginning my topic with the span of time that a sportsperson has, is very limited. In every sports profession there is a certain time period where a player can perform with his all efforts, eventually, the strength starting fading away. Comparing this profession with other professions, they have plenty of time to make money while sportsperson have a very short time to earn for them. However, the overall income that a sportsman earns in this short period of time cannot compensate with the other profession earnings as the sports professionals get higher salaries than other professionals and therefore are unable to make up in their whole professional life.
Continuing my second thought that sportsmen have a very risky career comparing to other professionals. For instance, sportsman has a very little chance to get succeed in his career and earn a plentiful salary and earn all these fame. However, on the other hand other professionals are not as risky as sportsmen career. They get chances to improve their career where sportsperson has only one specific sport to play. However, as I have mentioned in the above paragraph that sportsmen earn higher income is again contradict with the other profession incomes.
Finally, talking about the life threat that sportsmen do always have cannot be just ignored. For example, many sports like American Football, Wresting, Football these all are risky sports sometimes even life threatening. Comparing this professions with others they are pretty save regarding health or personal injuries. However, this injuries occur once in a while therefore this reason may not outweigh the other professional hard work.
After grasping a complete picture and enlighten the pros and cons of the above topic this is the duty of all the professionals to realize their responsibilities towards their professions in such a way that they must not compromise with the dignity and loyalty. Nevertheless, government also has the responsibility to change her policies regarding the earning pattern of individual professions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...tsperson has, is very limited. In every sports profession there is a certain time peri...
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Line 3, column 452, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...me that a sportsman earns in this short period of time cannot compensate with the other profes...
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Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this fame' or 'these fames'?
Suggestion: this fame; these fames
...nd earn a plentiful salary and earn all these fame. However, on the other hand other profe...
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Line 5, column 512, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'contradicted'.
Suggestion: contradicted
...t sportsmen earn higher income is again contradict with the other profession incomes. F...
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Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eat that sportsmen do always have cannot be just ignored. For example, many sport...
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Line 7, column 233, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...etimes even life threatening. Comparing this professions with others they are pretty...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...g health or personal injuries. However, this injuries occur once in a while therefor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, second, so, therefore, while, at least, for example, for instance, talking about, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2152.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30049261084 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97208901469 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48275862069 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 658.8 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4245119409 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.6 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261191499177 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871622212031 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641169673741 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149767293704 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621382851314 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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