With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threatened to the point of extinction.
Do you think it is important to protect animals? what measures can be taken to deal with this problem?
Cutting off the trees and make the area livable for humans is now a common practice. Not only that but hunting of animals has also become a hobby of some rich brats. We certainly need to look after this matter and need to take actions immediately.
First of all, animals should not only be protected as living things but in some countries they are the pride of glory and in some continents they have been a major source of earnings. For instance, in African Continent, the major source of revenue is generated from the tourism. The main attraction of tourists is the wildlife and the nature surrounded by them. You fill find some animal species in this Continent which you may not find anywhere else in this world. If African Continent allow tourists for illicit hunting or clean the forest area to build restaurants or hotels to accommodate the visitors then they are not only putting the animal lives in danger and force them to migrate but also affecting their largest source of income. Hence, this Continent need to take care these species and their environment to keep the revenue flowing.
To remove this trend, government need to play smart and sensibly. Firstly, they need to educate people and bring awareness about the important of wildlife existence. This could be done by initiating the campaign and encouraging people to attend. Secondly, a strict policy should be put in place for those who are habitual of hunting animals for fun. Nevertheless, increasing population is also a major concern of defamation. To handle this problem, many activists are putting efforts to spread fear about fatal consequences of over population such as feeding extra mouths or more animals slaughtering and killing plants. People should know that this will not only affect individuals but to the globe as a whole.
To elucidate, it is a big debate to overcome the problem of wildlife extinctions. It is true that we should not place the whole burden on government to make the policies to save the nature and wildlife but we as humans take the responsibility and save these forest lives not as part of humanity only but also as a part of our necessity.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, such as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84010840108 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59942601199 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514905149051 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.577838927 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2222222222 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145556906776 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043171882302 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533917528435 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779107801698 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580688433332 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.