Domination of humans on earth threatens wildlife existence through activities like illegal hunting, urban development and deforestation. As a result of human interference, many animals and birds species are on the verge of extinction. This essay highlights the repercussions of human activities on wildlife habitat and also discusses measures that can be adopted to curb threats posed by humans on animals.
Firstly, growing human population has increased pressure on earth's natural resources. Industries often require a lot of natural resources like water, wood, petroleum, gas etc. for their operation that is leading to increase in pollution and deforestation. For instance, forest cover all over the world has decreased considerably over the last century to meet the demands of urban industries. Reduction in forest cover is also accompanied by a decrease in population of animal species. Moreover, hunting of animals for their fur, tusks and horns has added to the reduction in number of animals species such as tigers, rhinos and elephants.
Protecting each animal species is important as human existence is indirectly related to existence of plants and animals. As an illustration, reduction in number of sparrows had led to major plague in U.K. in 20th century as sparrows breed on the insects that affect growth of rice grains adversely. Therefore, introduction of more and more natural conservation areas for protecting birds and animals species is of utmost importance at this point of time. Furthermore, regulations ought to be put in place to eliminate practices of illegal hunting.
To conclude, human interference in wildlife certainly poses a threat to birds and animals. Thus, effective measures should be taken by authorities to protect animals from human activities like illegal hunting, urban development and deforestation.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, as for, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54770318021 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08005211366 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551236749117 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3555925679 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.666666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282031049551 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913342773659 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780516202548 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175338301536 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041292978773 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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