Successful sports prodessionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Every profession has its own value, some let people earn more money while others just provide a moderate earning. Sports champions, however, get more amount for their work as compared to other noble professions. It is sometimes considered unfair to people working in other fields. In my opinion, I think it is not unjust to other professionals due to many reasons.
To start with, like other professions, sportsmen also get their monthly salaries, but they obtain more sum of money as a consequence of their hard work. For example, a player when performs well in a match by showing a tremendous performance gets a reward in the form of money. Moreover, even after their retirement, they can make money by becoming a commentator or can be a great sports analyst. For instance, I have seen many great cricketers from past who now appear on media during the cricket season like the world cup, and give views from their experiences which then mostly turn true. So, in this way, they also have a source of income after leaving their job.
On the contrary, some individuals think that other areas of work require more struggle. They consider that sportsmen do not have to strive on a daily basis as they have to work vigorously only when they have match fixtures. When there is no scheduled event, they have a gap having no work pressure. To exemplify, an engineer or architect has to work hard whole day for repairing a machine or making a structure of a building. Also, they get only limited time to have a break from their job that is on weekends only.
In conclusion, every job has its own struggles and every person gets paid according to his efforts. Therefore, it is not an injustice that players get more money than other professionals.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75657894737 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6236063442 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582236842105 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2548445974 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.375 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6875 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220781700547 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844343113935 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079101395569 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148480829085 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113995867943 0.056905535591 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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