Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that an individual’s attire is an indicative of his culture and personality. Although to a little extent clothes can be representative of traditions of a specific society, but I think they have nothing to do with a person’s character.
To start with, clothes necessarily do not show a cultural heritage as sometimes people from different culture try to copy the dress code of a certain nation since they like it a lot. For example, my classmate who belonged to Turkey really loved to wear Pakistan’s traditional dresses so no one was able to recognize that she belongs to a different culture. Also, sometimes students who go abroad try to copy the attire of the country where they are residing because they may have to combat severe climatic conditions.
Likewise, the clothes do symbolize the religion of a particular nation. For example, Muslim women wear hijab, which is their recognition. Sikhs wear turbans as their identity. So, in terms of religious identity we can say that clothing can indicate a bit about an individual’s customs and traditions.
On the contrary, a person’s dressing sense does not show his character. It is only the matter of his likes and dislikes. Moreover, due to globalization, people are now linked to a variety of cultures and traditions, so ideas about unique dressing styles and designs that are existing in any culture, are now exchanged throughout the world. Consequently, each and every person has a quick approach to the latest fashions, and then they wear which seems most appealing to them.
In conclusion, nevertheless, costumes essentially are not the signature of a culture, but they can give a clue about the religious status, hence tells a little about the culture but they can never be a symbol of a person’s character.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, likewise, may, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, then, for example, i think, in conclusion, on the contrary, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08361204013 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17201115877 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578595317726 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8782956245 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.571428571 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201731575654 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645260370876 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457365033868 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112740319455 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160667994293 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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