You would like to participate in a work related seminar in other country.
write a letter to thr person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accomodations and cost.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing to ask for the details of the job-related seminar which is going to be held in Thailand next month.
The information which I require includes the following:
1 As I have come to know that it is a three-day seminar, so kindly acknowledge me about the dates and duration of the program each day.
2. Also, tell me that what this workshop contains that is in what way it will benefit in our employment.
3. Provide me particulars about the type of accommodations available for the visitors.
4. Lastly, I would like to know the overall cost of the trip so I can manage my expenses.
Kindly grant me the answers to the above queries by email or fax. I would like to receive this information as soon as possible so that I can plan my visit accordingly.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Miss Yusra
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, lastly, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 716.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61935483871 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7276363394 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651612903226 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.225490083 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5555555556 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178743515568 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579571537179 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532314679284 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0689298404398 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506769368485 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.