Space exploration costs taxpayers exorbitant amount of money each year. What are the advantages and disadvantages of spending money on space exploration?
Nowadays, astronauts have become keen to discover the space, in order to explore the universe. So, a huge sum of money is spent on space research each year. The advantages of utilizing the money for this purpose are apparent, but its disadvantages are also to be taken into account.
To start with, money spent on space exploration programs is beneficial as scientists are trying to find the clues of life on other planets. In recent research, traces of water have been found on Mars, so they suggest that life can exist there, and if this is possible it will be a tremendous achievement as water is already getting short on earth. Moreover, there are some heavenly bodies in the space that produce radiations, which are harmful to the ozone layer, are also examined by the astronauts as to save the earth from the damaging effects of these rays.
On the flip side, other than spending money in the search for space, life on earth is in more financial need. Much of the amount obtained from the tax should be spent for the betterment of humanity. For example, these days the world is getting scarce of water therefore, money should be spent on discovering underground sources of water not out of the space. Space exploration is of no assistance if humanity on the earth is not getting all the comforts of life.
In conclusion, a large sum of money derived from the taxes consumed in discovering other worlds can be useful, but it will be a disadvantage if humans have not benefited from it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73384030418 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59657680536 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539923954373 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7822194531 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.181818182 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289730427468 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123802840188 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782218054183 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186341612056 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103046785931 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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