Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays advertisements are considered to be the best source to increase the sale of products. However, these top-notch advertises do not always match with the basic necessities of the people. I think it is true to some extent that promotion of goods through media display enhances the goods’ sale, but they are not always according to what people actually need.
To start with, producers try to make advertisements attractive to compel people to buy their products. Companies hire famous celebrities to ensure people about the quality of their products. For example, I have seen many TV commercials in which celebrities guarantee the liability of the product. Also, candies, chocolate, and other kids commercials are made so much colourful and full of fantasy that children get fascinated with them and force their parents to buy those things. Consequently, increasing the sale of products that are beyond the needs of people.
On the contrary, although advertises make some contribution to sales, but it is mainly the need that constrains people to buy certain goods. When in need, we ultimately buy things. Moreover, a product's demand is increased after getting the results that it was claimed for. For example, I bought a shampoo that was newly introduced in the market. My friend suggested me to use it. It really showed a brilliant effect, and when I went to buy it again, it was out of stock and there were many people who were demanding for the same. Furthermore, mostly, people do not purchase things by watching advertisements as they are satisfied with what they are using conventionally. To exemplify, some people who use their homemade spices never get satisfied with the market spices, no matter whatever is claimed about their quality in commercials.
In conclusion, advertisers may make people convinced to buy things that they do not really need, but it is not always the case as only a few people are persuaded by them. It is the necessity that makes people get whatever they want.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...advertises do not always match with the basic necessities of the people. I think it is true to so...
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
Suggestion: celebrities
...e to buy their products. Companies hire famous celebrities to ensure people about the quality of t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, it is true, on the contrary, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05405405405 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84744865093 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543543543544 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9525126668 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27777777778 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150092630591 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513250908887 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569101327622 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109922294645 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613794184342 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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