Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this modern world, where advertisement plays a major role in promotion and sales. However, does it fulfills the consumer needs? While there are many upsides to this practice, there exist few downsides too.
In this age of globalization, millions of organizations sale their billions of products through the world. 75% of the consumer goods where sold through advertisement and only 25% of commodities where sold through other sources. Advertisement makes us to know about the product. Nevertheless, it doesn't show all the details of the product, but official websites of the firm provides necessary data that requires. But most of the time people choose a wrong product through reviews that are made by Youtuber's we're they criticize the product for a silly reason and destroy brand image through which good products fail to reach the customer.
Nowadays, people believe in advertisement through which they upgrade themselves to the next level by owning the brand new products, wethere it could be a car or a brand new gadget it's obviously promoted through advertisement. For example a mobile brand called one plus, which sells its gadgets only through online without advertisement it's not a possible thing for them and now it's one of the leading mobile phone selling brand around the globe. Therefore, commercials makes life easy to enjoy the best products.
To conclude, advertisement is a great tool for selling and buying consumer goods, probably one of the most preferred tool. Were customers can find their own suitable product for their lifestyle. In my opinion advertisement is the best for buying a good product, which helps our daily needs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
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Suggestion: fulfill
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Suggestion: fulfill
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Suggestion: doesn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24347826087 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88292017466 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634782608696 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.0811128617 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7692307692 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132885622536 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480173733092 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441121193768 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785709715234 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197265039379 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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