Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

Essay topics:

Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

In today's context of modern lifestyle, someone's appearance and presentation in term of the choice of clothes considered to be precisely important. However, there are several who deem that Judgemental thoughts about culture and character based on a person's costumes are irrelevant, I side with those who believe that real personality and characteristics of a person are associated with the dressing sense as well. In this manner, the essay will put some light on my concern about the choice of clothes and related reasons.
Firstly, my viewpoint is with the old saying that the first impression is the last impression. Undoubtedly, it means that one's way of dressing appears others more manageable and mannered, results in positive reflections from others. For example, "how do people react to a person who wears a fancy dress for an interview?". So, clothing choice is the reflection of someone's character.

Moreover, cultural aspects are also related to clothes because of culture and traditions people's dressing change as well. What I mean is that different culture people wear different outfits. As I live in the country, India, which is known for its diversity in term of culture then it is irrefutable for me as I witnessed that in my country the culture and the dressing style probably change with every state and region. Hence, culture affects the choice of costumes indeed.

Conclusively, the essay discussed the reasons how a person's character and culture depends on the selection of clothes by putting relevant examples. Nevertheless, its personal choice of people what they want to wear, but the association of clothing style with character and culture cannot be overlooked.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, well, for example, i mean

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26838235294 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95513004401 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7985770942 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.230769231 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247205773297 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868278552869 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042952489547 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15191497873 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171959656561 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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