In many countries people tend to move overseas or move to a different part of their country after their retirement. Discuss why they do so and what the outcome of this situation is. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
A post-retirement movement to other locations has been seen in some parts of the world. However, what I believe is that the phenomenon can lead to positive as well as negative outcomes. The following paragraphs will articulate the reasons for this situation and possible results, before reaching to a conclusion.
To start with, paramount two causes might force the population to relocate to a different province. Firstly, during many private and public jobs, employees get posted over areas other than their motherland. So, after being retired, they prefer to be settled in their area of origin. In India, as an example, government workers are allowed to be transferred to their native city in the course of the last years of services. Secondly, the sentiments of senior citizens tend them to move to live with their family, children, and friends which is why people usually move to foreign places or other towns.
The aforementioned scenario must bring a dark or bright side. If old members of society do not find expected support and care at their homeland, eventually they may be depressed or socially isolated. Moreover, the family might consider retired members as a burden over family and do not treat them as per assumptions that will deteriorate the self-esteem and personal associations of elders at last. Vice-versa, outcomes can be more pleasant and highly motivational, if people are warm-welcomed and respected by family, friends, relatives, and society after retirement.
In conclusion, considering the reasons for the aforesaid process, I firmly believe that the older generation post-retirement deserves respect, love, and support from all of us after. going through a long period of life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 135, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to respect'
Suggestion: to respect
...der generation post-retirement deserves respect, love, and support from all of us after...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Going
...love, and support from all of us after. going through a long period of life.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9563639409 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663003663004 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2310862696 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.071428571 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251989385876 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06496583748 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493721542211 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120318595636 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508809633566 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.