(50) Recent surveys show increased interest in relocation and travel to other countries. What may be the reasons for this trend, and what will be the possible outcome from this behavior? Provide examples for your opinion.
A few years back, people were not having much interest in migrating to other nations. However, the scenario has changed now, and more and more people want to relocate and travel to developed countries. The following paragraphs will articulate some reasons for the aforesaid behavior and will present the possible result of this situation.
To start with, there can be numerous reasons which force people to move to foreign countries. Firstly, better job opportunities and a better lifestyle are paramount causes that lure natives of one country to another. If denizens of a nation could see lucrative careers somewhere else on the globe that might lead to a superior standard of life then they take it as a golden opportunity. For example, skilled migration to some developed countries such as Canada and Australia offer permanent residency and citizenship for stimulating brain-drain phenomenon. Secondly, by traveling to other countries one can explore different cultures and traditions which, in turn, would broaden the mental horizon. Lastly, some parts of the world are known as the paradise for visitors in terms of climate and environmental conditions, thus who do not want to go to those pales.
However, the scenario can eventually result in good as well as bad outcomes. On the positive side, not only greater job satisfaction and higher quality of life will be provided but it will encourage globalization and the economy also. As a result, global cooperation will get a boost and financial crises can be cured. But there are some aftermaths also. The over-movement of skilled people from one country can be a deterrent for the development and can deteriorate the growth graph. So, like everything the aforementioned position also has advantages and disadvantages.
In conclusion, considering the reasons: career expectations, high living standard, and pleasant weather, it is undeniable that individual’s increased fascination in shifting to foreign lands have benefits and drawback such as globalization and economic growth; and less skilled natives respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41230769231 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0620007382 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612307692308 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0963639138 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.9375 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1875 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215104570118 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601926962964 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591612369907 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115943592949 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645835010262 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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