nowadays, people are encouraged to buy more and more consumer products. some believe that it is not good for society, while others think that it is good for the economy. discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is certainly true that, nowadays, people are possessed of buying extravagant products. While many people think it a threat to society, I believe this trend facilitates economic growth. The following paragraphs will present my viewpoint regarding the above assertion.
On the one hand, the segment of society considers the aftermath of the scenario, might be concerned about materialism and discrimination. Firstly, if masses are encouraged to buy more and more products, it would lead to becoming more materialistic. Consequently, personal associations take a backseat and affect society drastically. Moreover, under-privilege or poor families which can not afford these products would face biased behaviour of individuals that indeed cause to scatter a community, society and country. Thus, over-consumption results in ill-effects towards humanity.
On the other hand, I firmly deem that production of products surges with escalating demand and result in more employment opportunities for all and sundry. The per-capital-income, which is a measure to scale a nation's economic development, for example, could be increased owing to expanding employment rate. Furthermore, multi-national companies get attracted towards markets with the high consumption rate for doing businesses that would be a plus point for globalisation and economy rate. India, for instance, is always being considered by numerous multi-national companies a favourable target due to its huge consumption.
In conclusion, I strongly feel that a country's economy is the measure to know that it is developed or developing nation, and increased employment rate and business-friendly market are the factors that would help to the economic success by stimulating per-capital-income and attracting foreign respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90384615385 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.57756611259 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6697637689 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.076923077 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0769230769 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189435159034 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638669856425 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768480862035 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990428911728 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620694171828 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.94 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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