Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?
People wear a different style of clothes all over the world. It is believed that clothes that people wear can represent where one is from and establish the character. This essay will argue that clothes can give only basic information about people however it does not show anything specific.
Clothes have always been something that people wear despite where they live. Some countries have special clothing that can represent where people might be from. Like in Bali they are keen on their culture and wear everywhere sarong as we know as a skirt. Sarongs are in a different style for several occasions like casual ones for everyday and fancy ones for celebrations. They have specific patterns on it and special material by which you can tell it is their original clothing. Also, Indian people like to wear unique clothing with sparkly and golden colors which can betray where they are from.
It is hard to tell people’s character by outwear but there are some signs to follow. People who wear clean and ironed clothes should be clean and organized in their life whereas grubby and wrinkled clothes can refer to untidy and sloppy personality. Sometimes dressing can confuse people about their real image. For example, people who follow the latest fashion can seem strange and unusual for others whereas they actually are intellectual and wealthy. Taking in count these aspects we can tell some simple things about the character but nothing deeply meaningful.
In conclusion, some countries are keen on their culture wearing national clothes which can tell others where they might be from. People’s outfit can give signs about one’s personality but nothing concrete.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, so, whereas, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18545454545 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41687182562 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530909090909 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3660801678 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.125 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219844374323 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936691120369 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631269765029 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162649169512 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633063866982 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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