Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
It is argued that our free time should be spend on useful actions that develop our thinking like reading books or doing the crossword puzzles while others believe it is essential to take a time off. Although some like to take it easy in free time, in my opinion, spare time is precious and needs to be filled with self-developed activities.
Self-developing is a really important part of our lives to keep the brain active. Imaging when everybody could start doing brain developing activities, our generation would be much more smarter and skilful. Especially in nowadays when people like to spend most of the free time scrolling in the smartphone without realising what is going on in the real life. It is necessary to start thinking in a realistic way and invest in the future. For example, to encourage this side of the viewpoint, the workplaces should offer a little area with books for workers to read during the break time or put some word puzzles out.
Some people believe that in leisure time it is the best to have a rest and lay down. It is usual to spend the free time behind television or using the smartphones, which is not ideal way to live. In result, a lot of people are having obesity problems due to that. To tackle this issue, people should have a campaign regarding to ‘’How to make a free time a quality time’’. In this campaign people might start realising that in spare time it is essential to do something beneficial that could improve their mind.
In conclusion, spare time is meant to be for self-developing which is time to improve our mind instead of waisting time watching the television or scrolling in the smartphone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spent'?
Suggestion: spent
... is argued that our free time should be spend on useful actions that develop our thin...
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Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'smarter' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: smarter
...ctivities, our generation would be much more smarter and skilful. Especially in nowadays whe...
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Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...ch more smarter and skilful. Especially in nowadays when people like to spend most of the f...
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Line 3, column 395, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a realistic way" with adverb for "realistic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ife. It is necessary to start thinking in a realistic way and invest in the future. For example, ...
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Line 3, column 493, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to encourage this side of the viewpoint, the workplaces should offer a little are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, regarding, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77319587629 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8125924943 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505154639175 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3887909929 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.846153846 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354935050653 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12056255855 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739743659496 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208858714078 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434901574491 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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