Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?
It is believed that keeping your household and job site clean helps to organize things. In my opinion, cleanliness is important to save time looking for lost property.
House cleaning is an important task to keep it look nice and for safety reasons. Bacterial and germs are easy to spread, so it is strongly recommended to clean all the surfaces and floor at least a couple of times during the week. Especially if you have small children in the house who are crawling and touching everything. They could pick up different bacterial from the untidy room that can result in sickness. Also, small pieces on the floor could be hazardous. For example, my friend slipped on the floor because of a toy and twist the leg so badly that even a year after she could not walk properly.
Workplaces need to be clean to avoid accidents and save time looking for tools. Most people have felt this feeling that they could not find things because it is so messy. To avoid this situation, every employee should help to organize tools and find a proper place for everything. In addition, a messy workplace can cause accidents. For example, I am working at childcare and keeping clean is important as small children could slip or trip over. Also, teachers and parents might not see hazard and fall, therefore, we always pay attention to the floor to pick up toys.
In conclusion, keeping home and workplace tidy avoids accidents and prevents losing tools.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'looks'?
Suggestion: looks
...leaning is an important task to keep it look nice and for safety reasons. Bacterial ...
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Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended cleaning'.
Suggestion: recommended cleaning
...s are easy to spread, so it is strongly recommended to clean all the surfaces and floor at least a c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47955157236 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8870890123 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.6666666667 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123998172963 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417155870314 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427787381684 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938836108004 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496847775518 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.