Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?
It is believed by some that keeping our home and workplace clean is a key. It is also said that everything should be well organized and placed at proper place. In my opinion, I agree with this as keeping home and workplace clean and organised will lead to a healthy environment , avoid any kind of confusions in case of emergency and increases the profitability of an organization.
Firstly, keeping our home tidy leads to a healthy atmosphere and people in healthy homes are less prone to diseases. For instance, family members especially children and senior citizens, who are more vulnerable to allergies and infections may catch diseases if exposed to dusty areas. However, if enough care is taken in keeping the residence dust free, these problems can be avoided. Also, if all the household items are well organised, it becomes easier to locate them. To exemplify, it is important to allocate a specific place for things like first-aid box, so that in case of emergency it becomes easier to find them and unnecessary panic is avoided.
Secondly, I also agree that along with home it is important to keep the working area clean and organised. There are certain professions were working areas ought to be clean; otherwise it may have detrimental effect. For example, if the confectioneries displayed in a bakery shop are not properly covered, it may invite several insects and flies to hover over them. This in turn may turn away customers. Also, it is observed that if apparels displayed in a shopping mall are not well organised or presentable, the customers may loose interest and may not purchase anything. This leads to a tremendous loss in business.
In conclusion, keeping home clean prevents diseases, also if all the items in a home are properly organised it becomes easier to locate them and unnecessary stress is avoided. Moreover, keeping work area clean attracts more customers, as a result the profession flourishes and becomes more profitable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 278, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nised will lead to a healthy environment , avoid any kind of confusions in case of...
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Line 5, column 528, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...nised or presentable, the customers may loose interest and may not purchase anything....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03363914373 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84009571397 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538226299694 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3858549099 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.875 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6875 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17396447799 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060350153052 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564502194381 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118072481897 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692468269149 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.