In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology (IT), for example World Wide Web & communication by email. However future developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive.
To what extent do you agree with this view?
Information technology has been flourishing by leaps and bounds in the last two decades and has been providing us new avenues for retrieving information and communicating with others effectively. Although some people believe that in the coming years this growth would have more drawbacks, I completely disagree with this, and believe that in the future IT will play a key role both personally and professionally.
Firstly, IT has become an indispensable part of every industry may it be hospitality, retail or healthcare. Furthermore, owing to the extremely intuitive IT services like WWW, these business organizations are now rapidly migrating their businesses online, which is helping them to grow manifolds. For example, according to a report published in “Times Of India”, owing to the profit “Hindustan Uni Lever” has generated from the time they have introduced E-commerce in their business, they have decided to move majority of its business online in the coming years. If these technologies do not develop in the future, it would become difficult for these companies to grow, which will have a negative impact on country’s economy.
Secondly, email and instant messengers have immensely revolutionized our lives, as they have made it easier to convey and receive information immediately. As a result , majority of people are switching towards these latest modes of communication. For instance, in a survey conducted by “Indian Youth Association”, it is expected that in the next ten years, around 70%-80% of Indian population will be transitioned towards these sources of communications replacing the traditional mails. If in the coming years these modes of communication are not developed, it would take a longer time to convey any information, which would hamper the importance of these messages.
In conclusion, I concur that the development of IT in the future will play a key role in the profitability of an organization. Simultaneously, it will also impact the personal life of people by keeping them socially connected.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: in the future
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52365930599 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40691452369 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593059936909 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.706633549 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.916666667 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4166666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196155950536 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065958077759 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588979491054 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112189546856 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458459483784 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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